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Tuesday 4 December 2012

The Spooky Old Shed

LI:To write a story openers to hook in the reader.


One hundred years ago,an old man named Jinkins use to live in the haunted shed behind our house.He was as mean as a pitbull,angry as a bull and had a behavior of a little kid.He use to bully people and kill people.
One rainy stormy night,he cursed the shed with secret codes.The next day he wasn’t there.Two weeks passed he wasn’t there.Police arrived and investigate,they say that he is missing.He was last seen in his old shed.Ten years passed a new house was building in front of his shed and the Henderson Family moved in.They wondered why is there an old shed behind their house.The children thinks it was haunted and it was haunted.One night the Henderson family was getting ready for bed and all of a sudden CLING!!.They all got a big fright.The dad went into the shed and AAAHHH!!The Henderson family worried and after a while later they got tired.They slept and the next morning they didn’t see the dad.Daxter ran to the shed and nothing was there.It was all nothing,just dust,spider webs and a small glass vase filled with two faces.Daxter noticed the face“Hey,I recognize this face?...It looks like my dads face and an old man’s face.Suddenly,the vase turned pink and SWOOSH.The vase grabbed Daxter into the vase.Daxter’s face came up in the vase and all was silent,JUST SILENT.There will be a new face coming up on Part Two.

TO BE CONTINUED...

End of Reflection 2012

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