LI:To write a story openers to hook in the reader.
One hundred years ago,an old man named Jinkins use to live in the haunted shed behind our house.He was as mean as a pitbull,angry as a bull and had a behavior of a little kid.He use to bully people and kill people.
One rainy stormy night,he cursed the shed with secret codes.The next day he wasn’t there.Two weeks passed he wasn’t there.Police arrived and investigate,they say that he is missing.He was last seen in his old shed.Ten years passed a new house was building in front of his shed and the Henderson Family moved in.They wondered why is there an old shed behind their house.The children thinks it was haunted and it was haunted.One night the Henderson family was getting ready for bed and all of a sudden CLING!!.They all got a big fright.The dad went into the shed and AAAHHH!!The Henderson family worried and after a while later they got tired.They slept and the next morning they didn’t see the dad.Daxter ran to the shed and nothing was there.It was all nothing,just dust,spider webs and a small glass vase filled with two faces.Daxter noticed the face“Hey,I recognize this face?...It looks like my dads face and an old man’s face.Suddenly,the vase turned pink and SWOOSH.The vase grabbed Daxter into the vase.Daxter’s face came up in the vase and all was silent,JUST SILENT.There will be a new face coming up on Part Two.
TO BE CONTINUED...
This is my Hyper link:End of Term Reflection
HORROR MOVIES
AFRAID OF THE DARK
LOTS OF LOLLIES
LOOKING CREEPY
OPENING DOORS
WITCHES WALKING WITH BROOSTICKS
EVERYTHING BUT CHOCOLATE
EVIL LOOKS
NOTHING BETTER THAN HALLOWEEN
One hundred years ago,an old man named Jinkins use to live in a haunted shed.He was as mean as a pitbull,angry as a bull and had a behavior of a little kid.He use to bully and kill people.
One rainy stormy night,he cursed the shed with secret codes.The next day he wasn’t there.Two weeks passed he still wasn’t there.Police arrived and investigate,they say that he is missing.He was last seen in his old shed.Ten years passed a new house was building in front of his shed and the Henderson Family moved in.They wondered why is there an old shed behind their house.The children thinks it was haunted and it was.One night the Henderson family was getting ready for bed and all of a sudden CLING!!.They all got a big fright.The dad went into the shed and AAAHHH!!The Henderson family worried and after a while later they got tired.They slept and the next morning they didn't see Jason.Daxter ran to the shed and nothing was there.It was all nothing,just dust,spider webs and a small glass vase filled with two faces.Daxter noticed the face“Hey,I recognize this face?...It looks like my dads face and an old man’s face" Suddenly,the vase turned pink and SWOOSH.The vase grabbed Daxter into the vase.Daxter’s face came up in the vase and all was silent,JUST SILENT.
There will be a new face coming up on Part Two.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Here are some story openers that you can use in your narratives:
Loud thumping noises late at night thundering against the floor.
A chilling scream from the garden at dusk scaring me when it was dead silent.
The jingling of keys ringing towards my ears and making my heart pounding hard and worrying about me and my family in the house.
Noises rustling on the roof like a cat scratching the door.
Footsteps thundering against the ground like frankenstein walking to his lab.
Dogs barking like they see ghosts.
“Do you hear that noise” I ask my brother,“Those whistling noises are like ghosts,Do you think our house is haunted?”
I hear this voice while I was asleep,my eyes wide open as big as a watermelon,my heart pounding like it is going to explode and my body shivering like an earthquake.
27.9.12.
My name is Lisiate
I like playing NFL,rugby and soccer.
I like chocolate cookies,chocolate nut,strawberry,cookies and cream flavoured ice-cream.
I like playing shooting games.
I am a chocoholic.
My favourite movie is The Waterboy.
My favourite music is Gangnam Style.
I hate ghosts,zombies,scary myths,legends and stories.
I hate dark places,scary noises and scary movie.
I love my parents and family.
I love my island called ‘Tonga’.
My name is Lisiate.
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The highlight of our visit to the Auckland War Memorial Museum was the volcano room. In the volcano room we had an amazing day. There was a model of a house in Puia St. As I entered the room I saw a living room and a sliding window where you can see Rangitoto and the ocean. All of a sudden the T.V came on automatic and the news was on talking about smoke coming out of the water. The smoke gets larger and closer, the larger it gets the faster the volcano is going to form. All of a sudden a thud struck out of no where. It gave me a fright and the T.V turned off automatically. White smoke transforming into black smoke and the room was shaking so hard that it felt like a giant had grabbed me and shook me so hard. KABOOM! The volcano shoots out black smoke and a GIGANTIC amount of smoke rushing towards us like a tsunami. CRASH! Everything quietens down and on the T.V we heard 'The Aftermath'. It was horrible, blobs of lava popping out like a popcorn on the hot burning active volcano sitting right in the middle of the sea. Huge smoke flying in the air as high as the Sky Tower. Burning trees, plants and houses poisoning animals and people. Burning tyres ruling the skies by covering it with black smoke destroying our atmosphere and creating a new world of darkness.
Back to reality, a man in a suit talked about the volcano and told us to go on a website which has a guide to survive before a volcano erupts. It was very frighting and a bit exciting.
