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Thursday, 17 October 2013

My Experience of the Volcanic Mounts of Auckland

I have visited all the volcanic mountains of Auckland. Mt Eden had a very steep crater. No one is allowed to go in the crater. In Mt Eden there is certain areas where public is not allowed because it would cause more erosion. It was very windy and cold. Three Kings was a small mountain which had a reservoir. We had to walk up and no vehicles were allowed. It didn't have a trig point. On our way to the top, we walked on water pipes. The pipe was 30 centimetres wide (approx) to walk on. When we got tot the top there was huge reservoir full of water only for emergencies. Mt Roskill was a small mountain and very noisy because it was next to the motorway. It was also very windy there. Mt Wellington is a big mountain. It had a flat surface and underneath was the reservoir. You can only drive three quarters of the way and the rest you have to walk to the trig point. It had a very steep crater. Mt Richmond was a small mountain. You have to walk to the summit. It had trees which had huge, strong roots popping out. Mangere Mountain was a very huge mountain near the Mangere Bridge. It was bigger than Mt Wellington and Mt Eden. The crater was also steep, and rocky. It had to trig points. There was three craters and a 'Lava Dome'. It was exciting. Mt Albert you can drive all the way to the summit. There was this steep hill going down and we slid down on the grass. It was fun, more fun than than a real slide. It had a 'Long Drop Toilets'. We climbed the trees like monkeys, taking photos, and jumping off. One Tree Hill you can drive all the way to the summit. It had lots of craters. On our way up, people was making words with the rocks. One of them said 'JESUS IS LORD'. At the summit it had a huge obelisk with a statue of Kupe. Sir John Logan Campbell was the one who donated the Cornwall Park site to the public of Auckland in 1901. You can see a nice view of the areas around. Mt St John was a little known mounts for most of the people of Auckland. In it's crater, there is a little pond. The mountain didn't have a trig but it had a view of Mt Hobson. Maori Pa use to be there about a hundred years ago. Mt Hobson a big mountain also. You have to walk all the way. It had a swing on it. It had a trig point. It was a little steep. We were standing near the entrance to the reservoir. It was creepy inside because it was dark with pipes. Inside was an interior door. Mt Victoria was a mountain with navy communication systems. It had a big gun called the 'Disappearing Gun'. It also had a field of red with white poky dots mushrooms. North Head was AMAZING even try for yourself.

Hip to the Hop Dance Lesson

Today Room 10 had there first dancing lesson. The instructors names were Christina and Captain. It was fun, and exciting. The instructors taught us Hip Hop. I had not done Hip Hop dancing before, so it was my first time. The Hip Hop moves are easy. It was very cool. We were dancing to the song ‘Boom Boom’ by Justice Crew. Dancing is one of my favourite thing to do. Even though I can’t dance, I like to dance. I truly can’t wait for next weeks lesson. Thanks Dance Fever.

Tuesday, 27 August 2013

Reasons to Stop the War



Do you ever feel sad when you hear the radio or see the news that a soldier has been killed?
Well, the war should have never started in the first place. What happened on September 11th, 2001 was terrible. The terrorist attacks were both traumatic and horrible for everyone. Although the attacks on the Twin Towers were no means to begin a war. I believe that people should stop the war, because other countries are getting involved in the hysteria, children being blurred by the violence and stop our troops dying.



First of all, I believe the war should have not started in the first place, because Afghanistan is going to be a ghostland . In fact, Afghanistan is not the only country that’s having a war, other countries is having a conflict like Syria, Iraq, Somalia, Pakistan, North Korea and Colombia are in trouble like Afghanistan.

Secondly, we should stop the war because children are being disillusioned by the horror around them. In addition, people’s homes are destroyed because of rockets and missiles attacking.In addition, the killing is increasing in every minute.

Finally, I believe we should send troops back from Afghanistan, so they can be safe from the bullets flying all over the place. In addition, many soldiers are being killed.  In fact, hundreds of innocent people are being shot to death in Afghanistan.  For example, one day, God might not forgive the hysteria happening right now. He might even punish them for what they have done wrong.
It is extremely important to stop this war because many of our brave men and women are being killed by this crazy war. The world would be a better place with no madness, craziness, and sadness. The President of the United States might say a happy speech if the war stopped. Just imagine living in a world full of peace and harmony without having any wars.


Thursday, 22 August 2013

Softball Recount

On Tuesday, Room 10 had there Softball lesson. We were learning how to bat. It was fun hitting the ball and catching the hits. Next week, I think we are going to play a game of Softball. I can't wait.

Tuesday, 13 August 2013

Squash for 4 days straight,YAY!!


Just last week, Glenbrae had a squash lesson for a week. Squash was a sport, kind of like Tennis or Badminton. It was my first time playing that sport. It looked kind of weird for me, but it was very fun. The sport ‘Squash’ used wrackets like tennis and a small soft ball. I learned how to play and learned skills of how to trick our opponents and get them out.

In the past 4 days, we had relays, competitions, rallying and practices. It was a very exciting sport to play, versing your partner and trying to be the ‘King of Squash’ in the class. Christian, Moli, Siupeli and I won and we had to verse each other to be the King. Out of the four of us, Siupeli was the King.

It was the last day of ‘Squash’ on Friday. The class was splitted into four groups. I was in group one. We had to play against groups to get the most points. My group won with 33 points and the others lost with a tie of 22 points. The Coach suddenly said that we had to do a relay and whichever team that wins get an extra 10 points. Group two won the race and they had 22 first and got an extra 10 makes them get 32 points, so my group won by 1 point.

Squash is now one of my favourite sports. I feel excited to know how to play squash. I can’t wait until I play squash again next time.

Our 'Intense' Softball Competition


Today Room 10 had their second softball lesson. It was fascinating and we learned to catch with the gloves on. We had to get into pairs and face opposite each other. First, we roll the ball and try to catch it. Second, we threw the ball high so we can learn to catch a high ball. Lastly, we had a competition. We had to throw the ball to my partner. Every time you we catch the ball, we can take one step back. We had to keep on doing that until we reach the furthest. The time was up and the people that had the least distance loses. There was another three groups that won, so we had to throw and catch the ball as many times as the other team or they will be out. Nathaniel and I was tied with Christian and Siupeli. Christian threw the ball and Siupeli missed it. Siupeli threw his hardest and Christian ran and catches it. Nathaniel and I had to catch both of the balls to win. The competition got so intense that Nathaniel and I was about to fail but, we didn't we actually won. Not to mention it was our first time. But we were happy. I can’t wait until next week because we are learning to use the bat. WOOHOO!!

Thursday, 1 August 2013

Our Valentine Birthday


Orientation: “Hmmm!! I wonder if we are going to Valentines?” I asked myself as soon as I woke up from a comfortable early sleep. The game sound wakes me with people shouting and calling. I see my game freak brother playing games, I wondered what time he woke up and started eating the power. I asked him what time he woke up, but he didn’t respond back because he was busy concentrating on the game.

I walked to the kitchen to see what was the time and it was 7:38. I sighed because I hope the time was like ten something so my mum can be awake and make breakfast for us hungry sleepers. I made myself some cereal and ate it up fast. THUMP! THUMP!! I heard my mum coming. “Morning” I said, “Morning” she replied back.

“Hurry up and have tea because we are going to a birthday in Valentines!!” my mum called out. We had tea, a shower, got dressed and getting ready. I look at the time and it was 12:29, “MUM! What time does the thing start!?” I called out, “ONE o'clock!!” she replied shouting back.


Middle: We were on our way to Valentines. When we got there we saw lots of people. The children went inside to the buffet first, so the adults can continue on their program. There was lots of different kind of foods like hot chips, corn carne, battered fish, spring rolls, a mix of healthy food and junk food. The plates full of oysters and other stuff.

I see mouths busy, munching, crunching, talking and laughing. I ate my food and it was delicious. I had a full stomach from all that junk and healthy food. I walked to the dessert area and I can see freezing ice-cream,, freshly made pavlova and mouthwatering cake sitting there calling me to eat them up. I took four pieces of cake and topped them with chocolate ice-cream. YUMMY!!

I sat at my spot and my spoon ready to dig in, but all of a sudden... POP!, someone’s balloon popped, giving 3 to 5 people a fright. My mouth filled with sweetness and my spoon looking muddy. It wasn't actually mud, it was chocolate.

End: We felt tired and I went and played with my friends. Shortly, my mum called, “ It’s time to go home”. I sighed and walked to the van and my sister and brother was waiting. We were on our way home.

As soon as I got home, I felt so tired, I went to sleep when we got home. That was the best birthday place ever. I can’t wait until I go there again someday.


Tuesday, 30 July 2013

Softball Recount

Today Room 10 had their first softball session. We learnt how to throw the ball softball way and standing in a squatting position with the buttocks sticking out to catch a rolling ball. It was fun. I can't wait until next week.

Tuesday, 9 July 2013

The 66th Anniversary of Roswell UFO Incident

Yesterday, was the 66th Anniversary of the Roswell UFO Incident. As you can see I am really self-interested in UFO's. The Roswell UFO incident took place in the U.S. in 1947, when an airborne object crashed on a ranch near Roswell, New Mexico, on July 7, 1947. Explanations of what actually took place are based on both official and unofficial communications. Although the crash is attributed to a U.S. military surveillance balloon by the U.S. government, the most famous explanation of what occurred is that the object was a spacecraft containing extraterrestrial life.

Our Last Soccer Session with Ben


Today Room 10 had their soccer lesson. It was a very hot day. We were the first class to do the session. Our Coach Ben, told us that we are going to have a mini tournament. We had to split into six groups. I was on the sixth group. Malulu,June and Tama was in the team. Our body getting ready to play some soccer and blood pressure rising madly.

First, we versed the first group. Christian, Hannah, Moli and Danielle was in that group. “ Come on! We can win this !” I shouted. Ben blew the whistle and we all started to play. The first group was very good at soccer. “YES!! WE GOT A SCORE!!” Christian cheered as Moli scored a goal. They passed, kicked, scored and cheered as they played along. They were good as the all whites. The first group won the first game, four to zero.

Secondly, we went stayed at the same court and versed group 4. They looked very easy with all their players, but at least they tried. They kicked the ball out, missed the scores and passed crookedly. They tried really hard, but I think they didn't know how to play because they are still learning. The team was like a herd of elephants following the soccer ball. When the ball goes in the corner. they all went there. Some even stood and just talked to the friends. “YAY!!” Anamanu shouted when she kicked the ball. We got 4 scores. Tama, June, Malulu and I scored.

Thirdly, we had to verse them again. We knew we are going to win again. My team kicked the ball as hard as a rhino. We scored as good as David Beckham. We got 7 scores and we won. The other team looked as bored as a Tour De France to watch. “YEAH!! WOOHOO!!” we cheered so loud as a NFL fans cheering when getting a touchdown. We moved on to the next team. We knew they were waiting for us.

Lastly, we played group three, they looked very difficult to verse. We started to play and Siupeli getting the ball, stepping Tama, but Tama gets the ball and misses the goal. “OHHH!!” we shouted. “ALL GOOD, TAMA!!” we shouted to make not make him embarrassed. We were competing each other like we were in a real soccer game. The time was up and no one scored. Too bad at least we had a good game. Today, was Ben’s last session with us because it the holidays next week.

Monday, 8 July 2013

Performing our Raps or Song

Today we had to make a clean rap or sing a song. Douglas and I read our rap. It was nerve wrecking, but the good part is performing. It really good in life to be confident. I'm going to make another rap. Tomorrow.

Thursday, 27 June 2013

Zombie Apocalypse on Earth

WALT:Write a Narrative


It was a dark scary night in a place called Zombieville. Zombieville was the place which had 1 million zombies. Earth was deserted, it was not people... it was ZOMBIES. There was only one survivor that lived there. His name was Richard. He had black hair, brown skin and was a very brave man. Richard was a very quiet person with no morals left to cross. He lived in a town called Metropolis. Metropolis was a big town which had robots and futuristic objects like flying cars. Metropolis use to look clean and shiny, but when the zombie apocalypse started, it looked like a dying city with metal bits flying, cars crashing down and automatic system not working. The whole place was orange and smog was ruling.

As Richard walked down to his car, he heard a noise. EEEERRRR!! Richard was alerted and pulled out a ray gun. He sees two small blue lights moving toward him. The small light started to look like eyes and there was a body which was rotting. CHICK! CHICK! BOOM! Richard shoots his double barrel shotgun. The lights flashed off and fell to the ground. As Richard walks towards the thing that fell he was wondering what it is. He couldn’t believe it. His eyes were frightened and hands shaking. “Zombie” whispered Richard to himself.

He jumps in his car and drove so fast into the air he automatically teleported to  Metropolis System Base. The place looked wrecked. Richard walks inside. He sees lots of blue lights looking at him hiding in the dark shadows. RRAAHHH!!! Zombies jumps towards Richard. BANG!!BOOM!!CRASH!!SMASH!! Richard kills the zombies as fast as lightning. He feels tired of all that hard work. Walking towards the ‘ON’ button. He pressed the button and then suddenly.... CLICK!CRACK!DING!DONG! The machine starts up and.... TICK!TICK!TICK! The lights turn on and all the automatic system are on at Metropolis. “Automatic System ON, System Base ON and Metropolis ON” said the computer.

CLICK!CLACK!CLICK!CLACK! A zombie walks towards Richard...SWING! He hits the zombie with a baseball bat. SPLAT! Bits of the zombie’s come off and hits the wall. Richard runs to his car and ... SMASH!CRACK! His car’s window cracked because the zombies have smashed it, one of the zombies hands came off. They run towards him, the zombies ran as fast as a Cheetah. Richard shoots his pistol BOOM!BOOM!SPLAT!SPLAT!! The zombies falls hard to the floor. Richard, then gets in his car and... SWOOSH!! He teleports to some place where he didn’t know. He wanders around looking and he sees a big sign with glowing lights saying ‘Welcome to ZOMBIEVILLE’.

He hears something and feels like someone was watching him. SCATTER!SCATTER! Something or someone ran behind him. He looks at the back and sees nothing. SCATTER!SCATTER! He looks to the front and sees nothing. Richard continues to walk and at the back of him was a black figure with sharp fingers and red glowing eyes. Richard looks back and the figure disappeared in the air.Richard walks, then joggs and the runs. The black shadow pushed him and Richard fell to the ground. He got back up and was alerted.

The black shadow stands in front of him and Richard holding his shotgun facing the shadow. Behind the black shadow was 1 million red eyes looking at him with teeths showing and dripping with blood. The black shadow screams RRAAHHH!! The red eyes jumped out of the shadows and running to Richard. BOOM!! He shoots the zombies, but only two dies. He ran out of the shotgun and shoots his pistol. BOOM!BOOM!CLICK! His pistols ran out and the only thing left was the bat. SWING!SWING!SPLAT!SMASH!WHIP! He hits so many time and only killed 10 of them. RRHH!! A zombie jumps behind Richard covering his eyes. AAAHHH!! Richard screams, “HELP ME SOMEBODY”. BOOM!!BOOM!!BOOM!!KABOOM!! A helicopter hovers on top of Richard protecting him. People in the helicopter shoot the zombies with their machine guns and RPGs. All 1 million zombies died and that was the last of them. The black shadow runs away and one of the guys in the heli sniped the shadow down. The helicopter landed and took Richard inside. The flew away and one of the shooters said, “Richard, is that you?” Richard looks around and sees his little brother. “YES, it is me. Bro” answered Richard. The helicopter flew all the way to Metropolis.

The ground opened up and the helicopter landed. Doors opened and all the people in the world was underground. There was an underground world. We told everyone, “There are no more zombies on Earth. We can go back out and fix our planet.!” The doors opened with ramps to the way out. Everyone rushes outside for fresh air. The took Richard to the hospital and fixed him. He was all fixed up and looked like he wasn’t injured any more.

200 years late, Earth look the way it was, all clean and green. Richard, his brother and the helicopter crew was in the Heavens looking down at Earth. If there was another zombie apocalypse, the team in Heaven watching will protect Earth in all cost, just like what they did in Zombieville and Metropolis.

10 years later,It was a dark scary night in a place called Zombieville.....RAAHH!!

Tuesday, 25 June 2013

Soccer Lesson 3

Hooray! We are having a soccer lesson!. We lined up and Ben said, "Next week is my last session with you guys,should we play a game of soccer today and next week do our last soccer skills?" "YES!" Room 10 replied. We were divided into four groups. The first two teams was versing each other. Both teams was very nervous. They started the game in a enthusiastic manner. The ball fly's in the air and when the ball was near the goal, the team was scared and loose. The teammates runs as fast as they can and saves the ball. The time was up and it was our turn. We felt charged as a battery. Kicking, jumping, defending, running and scoring all over the place where the ball goes. It was a very close game but the time ran out. The blue team did very well. All the games was close. At the end we felt very tired and sweaty. I said thank-you to Ben for teaching us lots of soccer skills and we enjoyed the soccer game. I felt disconsolate because next week is our last soccer session.

Thursday, 20 June 2013

Book Review:Bottle From the Sea


Title:Bottle From the Sea
Written by Evan Croker
Illustrated by Christina Bernazzani
Setting:Lake
Plot:They found a bottle and it is a treasure map.
Conclusion:They found hidden golf balls under layers of leaves.
The story was easy and the activity was also easy.I am going to improve my reading.

Tuesday, 18 June 2013

Soccer Session 2

Today,Room 10 had there second soccer session. We learnt to dribble and do the scissors with the soccer ball rolling. At the end,we had a game of soccer. We finished with a tie. Zero to Zero. We had fun at soccer session. Now I know how to trick people in soccer.

Monday, 17 June 2013

Letters to the Rotarians


Lisiate
Room 10
Glenbrae School
Glen Innes

17 June 2013

The Rotarians
Pakuranga
Auckland

Dear President

Thank you for sponsoring our school to have Duffy Books. We appreciate your kindness. Reading makes us understand English better and  also makes the world more interesting. It will also help us in the future when we grow up. Please continue to sponsor us in the near future or until we are out of the map.

Your support is greatly appreciated.


Thanking you
Yours sincerely
Lisiate




Tuesday, 11 June 2013

Soccer Skills

Today Room 10 had their first soccer lesson. Our coach's name is Ben. He taught us how to juggle a soccer ball with our feet. After that, we had a game. At the end of the game both of our class teams were one all. It was a draw. I can't wait until next week to have another session with Ben. Thank you Ben.

Wednesday, 29 May 2013

Procedural Writing-Instruction:Jump A Rope

Today I wrote a Procedural Writing of 'How To Jump A Rope'.It was very easy.I am proud of myself.

Wednesday, 22 May 2013

Netball Session Description


What an AMAZING session we had today.We all got skills taught,chest,passing,stepping,faking,goal shooting,catching and how to do the swift movement.Everyone was active,nervous,sporty and getting their lungs filled with enough air to cheer hard to their team mates. The class looked happy even though they were nervous in the inside.Everyone’s faces looked like they are versing another opponent from a different school.It like they don’t know their friends on the other team.We played a game and it was so much fun.It was so much that everyone was rushing and cheering to the top of their lungs.Everyone was talkative,tired,proud surprised,sweaty and some was jealous.The two teams was cheering at their own team mates.I can’t wait until next week for another game.


Monday, 20 May 2013

Tread Lightly Caravan


Today Room 10 went to the Tread Lightly.The Tread Lightly Caravan is a programme about the environment.We played a game called Gecko and Vines,it was like snake and ladders.I learnt how to save the environment and protect the earth,by turning the tap off when I’m brushing my teeth and take quicker and shorter shower.Make sure I have a clean one too.

After that,we went to the Caravan.It was fascinating because the had a microscope inside and a touch computer.The microscope was amazing.We can take a small plastic bowl with a dead insect or object inside.We zoomed close and we can see clearly the eyes which had a lot to lenses.The microscope can see what we can’t.

We had to answer questions about ‘Energy,Transport,Food and Waste’.I had a great time.I would like to do it again.